Need teens to give opinion on opening for YA book...what do you think?
Mar 31, 2009 by Amber | Posted in Books & Authors
I am in the process of publishing a YA Urban Fantasy along the lines of Twilight. Please read the first scene and give me some feedback so I can fix it if there's a problem. Mainly I need to know if the first scene grabs you or leaves you cold and why.
Sorry, I am not a teen. But I still like it. What's my excuse ? I work with children and read to them a lot .
I would change a few sentences , though . I think " He waved his hand over the doorknob and heard it click " sounds
Lika | Mar 31, 2009
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